On Dawlish Beach



On my walk, I stumble over sharp
stones, sink into sand, then stoop
to set an injured beetle on the sea wall.

Up above, the train I ride on weekdays
hugs Dawlish beach, its yellow picnic
cloth spread out under the sky.

Startled by flapping wings, I jump
back as a seagull swoops to gobble
up the tasty morsel I left uncovered.

Often you wait all week for a metaphor,
then two turn up on the same day
like apple green country buses.

About this poem

The train mentioned is the line from Exeter to Dawlish. I travelled on it twice a day from autumn 1976 through to the summer of 1977. The train line runs between the cliffs and the beach. I hadn't thought about the place in years. Definitely a poem about the past. The metaphors referred to concerning the beetle and the seagull are to do with the idea of 'helper' and 'helped'

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Written on January 12, 2023

Submitted by on December 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XXX XXX XXX XXX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 434
Words 90
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3

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  • Giselavigil
    Great imagery. I can see it! Nicely done
    LikeReply 14 months ago

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