The World through the Eyes of the Melancholic Ones

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  Jewoo525

  I think the final line makes this poem. The poem can come off as a bit overly sentimental, or even too reflective at some points; however, I think in purpose and practice the choices the poet makes encapsulate exactly what he sets out to do: to capture what melancholy looks like to people who experience it. The poem, much like the people deep amid such emotions, wouldn't be concerned with the judgment of others. They aren't there to impress, they are trying to stay afloat it all while self-rationalizing their existence- they don't care about the small crowd gathering at the surf to stare at him sitting by the shore despite the tide coming in.
  
  I wasn't sure about this poem upon initial reading, but the last line had me coming back to re-contextualize its meaning. I'm glad I did. A well-written poem, perhaps in a style that I otherwise would not prefer, but has doubly impressed me for subverting my expectations. Well done and keep writing! more »

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