I thought we had something solid



I mean we both had the same intentions
But suddenly i turned into one of your temptations

Just yesterday you found me amusing
But today it is my heart that you're bruising

Although there's something that keeps me confused
It is  my emotions that feel reused

You manage to fill my heart with anxiety
But now let's include reality

In my mind , it is worry that you injected
So now I'm thinking I should've rejected

About this poem

I wrote this poem because it is a way of pouring out my feelings . It helped me overcome my heartbreak

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Written on November 20, 2023

Submitted by mntima on November 29, 2023

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Scheme AA BB CC DD XX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 424
Words 86
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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