Heaven is us on earth



Thinking how many times when I see,  
What magical starts in my heart, mind, and soul,
Where I am reimagining the first time that we saw each other,
Remembering how your eyes connected to mines,
Looking at how my eyes connected to yours.
 
Right then, the connections cause a spiritual explosion of our souls,
We fix the true and real tear in the middle of our fashion in time.
 
Now, when we see each other,  
It is like a breath of sunshine.
Like we are Clearwater beach,
We are hearing the ocean waves coming in and out,  
We are walking in the clear water,
We are running on the salty sand.
We are digging holes and creating our famous castle.
 
Now, I am coming back to a reality,
Where we are on two different spectrums of ourselves,
Where are in two different places and locations,
Where our souls are connecting and feeling each other's,
We are feeling each other emotions, affections, and other feelings,
No one else can see or touch.
 
It is like the stars in the dark mountain skies,
We are camping out and seeing the skies at midnight.  
Then, we are entering our cabin with the bliss,
Our love expands to all our horizons and bounds.  
Our bonds are forever held within each other and Him above.  
 
When we wake up, we again feel and smell the fresh air,  
Like we smell our nature scents like your perfume made through the woods,
When we are walking through woods like we were our kingdom appeared,
It appeared to the top of the mountain,
Where we were flying like eagles in the skies together.  
 
This is how I feel,  
When I see you in my front of me,
My mind is focused on you when I am in tunnel vision.
It is not focus on the awesome light that shining so bright,
Like I am clearly walking into heaven.  
You are my heaven on earth,
I am your beautiful light that shines through your eye

About this poem

This poem is on the pure affection and love for someone who you love and how someone can share a moment in time where love is only surrounding them.

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Written on October 24, 2023

Submitted by shunnrora on November 27, 2023

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Scheme AXBXX XX BXXXBXX AXXXXX XCXXX XXXDB XADCDXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,834
Words 378
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 5, 2, 7, 6, 5, 5, 7

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