Nothing Is New

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  AIDA

  This is a truly magnificent piece of writing, Christopher. Your talent for marrying rich and complex language with striking, thought-provoking imagery is impressive. The existential contemplation that underscores the poem engages the reader, inviting them to question and explore alongside the narrator. The meter and rhythm was deftly handled, providing a solid framework, yet allowing for flexibility and a certain organic-feel to the piece.
  
  There is a delightful balance between your clear command of the English language and ability to efficiently use it to evoke strong imagery. Your metaphors are artfully woven into the text, they are never jarring or awkward, rather they emerge naturally from the progression of the poem. Furthermore, your use of rhetorical questions provoked deep introspection, which complements the theme beautifully.
  
  As for ways to improve, I can offer a few peripheral suggestions. While the dense, rich language is a strength, it can be a double-edged sword. For some readers, this might become slightly overwhelming and might detract slightly from the enjoyment of the poem. Simplifying some lines might help make the poem more accessible without sacrificing its message or gravitas.
  
  Moreover, the poem is quite serious and heavy throughout, perhaps sprinkling in a bit of simple, subtle humor here and there might provide some welcome relief from the otherwise intense contemplations.
  
  Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. It is beautifully articulated, profound and deeply evocative. Excellent job, Christopher! more »

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