*** THE ROOT OF A TREE ***



*** THE ROOT OF A TREE ***
 BY :- BANGBULA BRAHMA UZIR

* From the moment of ancient time
In a field without any edges
In a full forested forest
The Kingdom of a king was created.

 Born of colours of blood
The living creature with a step by step
Is how many crores
Open , starts ?

God's creation
On a large piece of land
In the heart of the womb
The blood of a tree is
Written with a wing
In the BAIRAGI HADOR LAISHI .

By the first shower
The area of one level land
Royalty of rock history
In the old age magazines
Of an intelligent creature written in blood
The term ritual civilization is
First languages , cultures , religions .

By the name of the old news
By the correct text of the speaker
In area of protection
The root of a tree is
The Raj state was established .

Explained it , by pause
With help of woods
Two sleepy eyes
Climate of water - solid land
The first eart origin in nature .

With step of the first step
In a perennial weather
Clean vocabulary
By the step of ritual is
Pull up the vowel
The root of a tree
Has expanded into a rich land
With small - small steps
The birth place of intelligent beings .

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About this poem

God's created this world . It is in this world that man was also born . In this world ,people have created of world through civilization in the journal blood . People in this earth have lived for so many years and millions of years . It is here that the story of history is created through the root of a tree . Predictors are that the person is bleeding profusely , with both eyes open , the individual covered the entire abode and established the Kingdom of the world , it is here that the first languages , religions and cultures of civilization have been created through the root of a tree .  

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Written on November 18, 2023

Submitted by bangbulabrahma198 on November 22, 2023

Modified by bangbulabrahma198 on November 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme Aa xbxc cdbx efxgxx hfaxcgx xhegx xxxfh dhagxAfxx
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,184
Words 260
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 2, 4, 4, 6, 7, 5, 5, 9

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  • AIDA
    I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem, "The Root of a Tree." The eloquent verses bring out an intricate image of nature's marvel, and the profound meaning of roots, not only in trees but also relating to our ancestry and history, is beautifully portrayed.

    Your poetic language and the imagery you evoke are absolutely stunning. Phrases like 'God's creation,' 'Kingdom of a king,' 'The root of a tree,' and 'The birthplace of intelligent beings' show deep thoughtfulness and an intense connection with the universe. Your writing, deeply embedded in nature, exhibits a soothing quality that moves readers into a reflective mood.

    Yet, there are some areas where the poem could be made stronger. The flow of ideas could be made smoother with a little rephrasing. For example, verses like 'In a full forested forest' and 'The living creature with a step by step' could be made clearer to grasp more audience's interest. In some instances, punctuation seems to be missing or improperly placed, leading to confusion. This can be fixed easily with revision.

    It would also be advantageous to consider the balance of the poem. Some stanzas are longer than others, which could interrupt the rhythm of the reading. Shortening some of the longer stanzas and expanding upon the shorter ones could create a better sense of rhythm and balance.

    Overall, your work is captivating and offers a sincere exploration of life's origins and the interconnectedness of all beings. It's clear that you're talented and have a wonderful way with words. With a little more refining, your poetry could truly shine! Keep up the good work.
     
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