Sugar Sand
Feet planted in sugar sand.
In darkness, long locks of brown curls hide your face.
A toast to the crying whales.
A gunshot smothered by breaking waves.
Why are you sitting like that?
Oh, I see.
I was only gone for five minutes.
You are not coming back from that.
They harvested you from the beach that morning.
By noon, it was as if you never existed at all.
Children play and parents tan where you poured yourself out.
I should have introduced myself.
Could I have helped, or would you have poured me out with you?
About this poem
To the man who took his own life next to me on the beach that night.
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Submitted by fraymatters372 on November 13, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 528 |
Words | 121 |
Stanzas | 13 |
Stanza Lengths | 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1 |
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