Storms That Withstand, Roots That Trust



"The wounds of words cut deeper than any blade,
Scarring young souls that once shone bright.
Each barbed remark a thorn that festers,
Poisoning pure hearts with parasitic spite."

"My child, so eager to delight and please,
Wilting under callous critique.
Petals plucked before their chance to bloom,
Nipped by cold winds of disdain so bleak."

"Fragile shoots strained under harsh demands-
"Be better, do more, don't disappoint!"
Impossible standards crushing tender stems,
Destined to fail, no matter how they point."

"So they stop reaching for the light above,
Bowed by burdens too heavy to bear.
No longer thriving in rays of warm love,
But trapped in shadows of self-despair."

"For when careless tongues inflict unseen scars,
When flaws highlighted eclipse all worth-
Seeds of self-love struggle to take root,
Choked in soil of self-doubt since birth."  

"Yet still I see faint sparks in lowered eyes,
Glimmers of light not fully dimmed.
With patience and care the flame can rise,
If gently cupped and not condemned."

"I will speak words that uplift and bless,
Watering hearts once left to wilt.
Tending to spirits in sore distress,
Helping them heal from harm and guilt."

"Though storms may batter, they'll withstand enough,
Sturdy in roots woven with trust.
Regaining strength to reach for the sky,
If nourished with unconditional love."

"For burning bright is their inner light,
Needing but tender rays to thaw
The ice of cold criticism that froze  
The flow of self-belief I saw."

"So I'll nurture the good I know is there,
Coaxing it out with compassion's balm.
Mending the damage of disregard,
Shielding them softly under my palm."

"Each child a garden, their spirit the soil,
Needing careful tending to grow.
I'll pull the weeds of words thrown to spoil,
Help their true beauty unfold and show."

"For they are worthy simply as they are,
Unique blossoms, vital in their place.
No measuring stick can determine their value-
Already so loved, already so precious."






















   The poem is part of a full version found in the book “Homo Sapiens” Part Part I - XVIII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular “Homo Sapiens” book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the “Homo Sapiens” series, as well as other books by the same author.   So, don’t hesitate and get a copy today from one of the many online bookstores.   Khublei Shihajar Nguh,  (Dhanewad  )(Thank you )

About this poem

This poignant poem reflects on the profound impact of hurtful words, emphasizing the lasting scars they leave on young souls. The verses convey the struggle of individuals crushed by criticism, yet also hold a message of hope. The speaker pledges to nurture and uplift, believing in the intrinsic worth of each person, fostering resilience and self-love against the harsh winds of judgment. The imagery of a garden symbolizes the delicate nature of human spirits and the importance of cultivating a supportive environment.  

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Written on May 24, 2019

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on November 12, 2023

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Scheme XABA BCXC BDBD EFEF BGXG BXBX BHBH XXXE AXBB FIXI JKJK XBLB L
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,636
Words 512
Stanzas 13
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1

Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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