Feels like Heaven



If Heaven was a person, it would be you.
Just looking at you, listening to you speak, being close to you.. 
feels like Heaven to me.

If Heaven was a place, it would be right here.
The things I see, the sounds I hear, the way I feel, and what I'm learning here..
feels like Heaven to me.

If Heaven was a moment, it would be right now.
For yesterday is gone, tomorrow is unknown, so all that I can behold is now..
feels like Heaven to me.

If Heaven was love, it would be in me.
Day by day, I'm learning to love the perfection in my flaws; to embrace the good and the bad, the light and the dark, and everything in between.. 
feels like Heaven to me.

About this poem

A reminder that true joy comes from loving who you are, loving where you are, loving what you have, loving who you are with, loving what you are doing and being grateful for it all in this very moment.

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Written on November 11, 2023

Submitted by denz22n on November 12, 2023

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Scheme aaB ccB ddB bxB
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 654
Words 144
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3

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