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Coma

JESUS BETANCOURT 1955 (New York)

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Bandages wrapped on my forehead
Lamplight piercing eyelids while shut
Fact I sense light am I alive and not dead
Unable to move at all maybe not

Sound of voices near me are sad
Unable to speak can't respond
Deep in a coma I'm feeling mad
I want to wake up from beyond

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Written on November 08, 2023

Submitted on November 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAX BCBC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 268
Words 54
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 4
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