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The empty hand

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Elegy
When I....
don't have anything
I just raised my hand up
scream to my creator
Help me.....
then I waited...
waiting....while I do something
then at night I raised my hand again
from the bottom of my heart
thank you, I'm grateful
for your answer
who approached me
what I'm waiting for....
and I will always wait for YOU

About this poem

this is my experience in my nothingness....i ask God always...and try to find HIM

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Written on October 03, 2023

Submitted by Trigon on October 03, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFBGHIDEJK
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 317
Words 64
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14
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