Loosing you.



A sorrowful tale of loss and pain,
A bond that can never be regained,
A sibling, a friend, a shining light,
Taken from our lives, without a fight.

The memories we shared, so dear and true,
Of laughter, joy, and dreams anew,
Now tinged with grief, and tears so bright,
A heart that's breaking, day and night.

The ache in my heart, so deep and wide,
A void that cannot be denied,
The emptiness, a constant guest,
A sorrow that will not rest.

The memories of you, so vivid and clear,
A smile that lit up the year,
A laugh that echoes, though you're gone,
A love that will never be undone.

The pain of losing you, so sharp and real,
A wound that will not heal,
The grief that lingers, day by day,
A sorrow that will never fade away.

But even in our sorrow and pain,
We find comfort in the memories we gain,
The love we shared, the laughter we had,
The memories of the times we were glad.

These memories, they keep you near,
A bittersweet reminder of what's dear,
A sibling, a friend, a shining light,
Taken from our lives, but always in sight

About this poem

This poem is about loosing somebody. It goes through grief and sadness and is very raw and real

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Written on October 20, 2023

Submitted by kaydeemccarthy15 on October 25, 2023

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Scheme axBb ccbb ddee ffxx gghh aaii ffBb
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,044
Words 232
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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