Echoes in the Stars

Oscar Auliq-Ice 1994 (Port Elizabeth)



Whispers echo in the vast expanse,
I gaze above, feeling the cosmic dance.
Stars tell tales of our past delight,
Shining brightly, piercing the night.

I feel the universe's harmonious song,
A celestial rhythm where we belong.
We soar together, beyond the sky,
Chasing the comets, learning to fly.

Life's adventures, we took them in stride,
With the universe, side by side.
Time took its course, you became the night,
The guiding star, so pure and bright.

In the fabric of space, our stories entwine,
You're not just yours, you're forever mine.
Together we journey, beyond the bend,
Dear star, our saga will never end.
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Written on October 22, 2023

Submitted by Auliq-Ice on November 01, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEBB FFGG
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 620
Words 123
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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