One Last Peek
One Last Peek
By Christopher Commodore©2021
Please wheel me out from this cold darkened room,
For one last whiff of glorious sunshine’s glow.
A final spell to mock the grip of doom
Before I join that somber realm below.
And when I’m gone, boast not; you have not won.
My soul’s just loosed from this life’s brutal haze.
All fruitless toil and endless drudgery done
Death’s seeming victory’s but a fleeting phase.
No more its brutal strangle hold to dread.
The gore has freed all from this eerie stage,
Eternal time He’s fixed abroad instead,
And crushed that tide of restless hellish rage.
From earth I’m gone, in rapture to reside.
There, never more iniquity to face.
O glory be, secured right by His side,
Eternal love abiding in his grace.
If you believe, you too could see His face.
A mustard seed of faith secures your place.
As well you walk by trust, not what you see
That gore-sealed promise is for you and me
About this poem
This poem is meant to ponder the inevitability of passing to another realm. The vision addresses a belief founded on faith and the message of the gospels. Regardless of religious background or faith, no one can escape that inevitable hour...
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Submitted by ti.min on October 29, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | XX ABAB CDCD EFEF GHGH HHII |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 939 |
Words | 187 |
Stanzas | 6 |
Stanza Lengths | 2, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4 |
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