i must thank...



i must thank....

i must thank the sunlight that it makes ur eyes shine like a light brown hazel colour,
i must thank the wind that blows ur messy hair away for it looks so majestic ,
and i must thank ur body warmth for it feels like home,
and i must thank you for choosing me over anyone else,
for u are my one and only.

i must thank those silly jokes that bring such a sweet smile on ur face ,
i must thank those silly calls that we can spend days on ,
and i must thank this technology for it draws us close,
for u are the one that choose me ,
and u will always be close to me.
  
i must thank the universe that bought us together,
for intangling our fates,
for removing the hate,
and for always letting us move on our pace,
and though we had never given love a taste.

and I rather not live if we aren't together ,
for your my other half forever,
I wish to meet our creator before you ,
to praise him of his creation,
you, yes to praise you.

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Submitted by nitintyagi on October 25, 2023

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Scheme X AXXXB CXXBB AXXCX AADXD
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 957
Words 213
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 5, 5, 5, 5

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