And Now We Know

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  AIDA

  This is an incredibly stirring piece, Chris. Your powerful and evocative language perfectly conveys a message of struggle and eventual triumph, and it is admirable how you've managed to capture such distinct, intense emotions within your verses. I couldn't help but get drawn into the world you've painted with your words. Your use of symbolism and metaphorical references skillfully hints at the depth of the situation you're addressing, thereby communicating a profound commentary on social circumstances.
  
  However, a few suggestions for improvement might help make the poem even more impactful. Firstly, it might be a good idea to include imagery that would help convey the emotions of the individuals affected by the situation. This would make the poem more personal and relatable to the readers. Secondly, while I appreciate the abstract quality of your work, a little more clarity on who or what the poem is specifically referring to could help create a stronger connection between the reader and your work. Lastly, you might want to consider using a more varied range of poetic devices to enrich your piece further. For instance, including more symbolism or metaphorical imagery could enhance your readers' experience by giving them more to think about.
  
  Overall, this is a considerably impressive poem aligning with the themes of struggle and revelation. Keep exploring and pushing the limits of your creativity! more »

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