One Day Under The Moon



“One Day Under The Moon”


“One Day Under the Moon”

 I-met perfection, dedication, and an ambition to conquer something deeper
I stood still and gazed into the beauty of the glow that showered his undercover
The moon so huge, so round, astounded by his presence
The promises under the moon were false to deny the words that spilled from his mouth.

“One Day Under the Moon”

I knew that my life would forever be protected and directed to pure bliss
My heart was swollen and genuinely committed to a tarnish
The moon held his secrets so tightly even the man on the moon cried for me
He was as bright as the moon that loving evening.
Timing was my lesson to never lose my faith in the Devine
Though, I discovered that his bright was not as bright as mine

“One Day Under the Moon”

The person I met was an illusionist
The mind games, the stories, the put downs, the name calling, the hold on his money, and the nightmare I couldn’t wake from.
The moon was supposed to be never false
Our love was only mine alone
My error was that the love for you grew
My love did become only the external death of our affair
Love seems to make it likewise in the end
We know nothing of anything in this life
The proof is that our love being yours or mine,
The mistake is the same
Our union we believed prove to be false

“One Day Under the Moon”

Truth be told
I never should of listened to your whispered words
In the dark

“One Day Under the Moon”

While expanded and magnified my surroundings
The moon we met under must have not been full as a true full blown moon should
The intensified drama of your chaos, stubbornness, and the hunger to control everything and everyone around you.
Finally defeated the deceitful sneaky way
I never felt so exhausted in my life
The energy I once had has diminished painfully slow as a turtle running a race

“One Day Under the Moon”

The plan that would benefit the future
Truth be known the focus of attention or conversation
Increased the energy in you.
Increased the level of work productivity
Our moon lit up the path to get organized
Your love was never meant to be mine
It was me light that kept you filled, don’t you see!
Obviously, the moon provided more literal light
Allowing the illuminating property of enhancing your awareness tonight
The realization you failed to notice within me.
The failure to notice that I was like no other you ever encountered in your life times 3
I will always be the spotlight above the ground you walk on
Because it will forever highlight my genuine inner being
My emotions swayed and only strengthened
Time was the uncertainty
Destabilizing effects many find frustrating  

“One Day Under the Moon”

I learned instead of being at the mercy of the moon
I will never again meet a human being under a natural light
Especially,
“ One Day Under the Moon”

About this poem

I met my partner on October 15, 2004. Well this poem is about the day I met the man of my dreams. The both of us didn’t get to know each other to decide and make the proper choice to keep the relation as friends or as a union with each other. One day under the moon I remember that every word that came out of his mouth had to be words sent by God himself. When I educated myself later as the years went from one to five to 10 years and many more that followed. Faithfully I walked along side him. Without fail to show him what he showed me. I began to see his whole demeanor change so drastically towards me. I felt his hate, his frustration, and his lack of expressing love to fill my appetite for the emotional support I craved, Falling for his charming, charismatic, witty, smart, strong, tall, cute laugh, and of course the kind and loving ways that stood for all I was and believed in. Although, “ One Day Under the Moon” He failed to tell me of his past. The thought of him never ending wha 

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Written on September 18, 2023

Submitted by Redlovecruz on September 18, 2023

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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 2,859
Words 548
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 1, 6, 1, 11, 1, 3, 1, 6, 1, 16, 1, 4

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