Mom please say the words

Ginette R 1996 (Mexico)

September 23 


In a million ways
I can see you love me
In a million ways
You show me that you care
But sometimes what you say
Makes me feel a disappointment
Your words cut deep into my soul
They make new wounds in me

I know you love me
I see it every day
But it doesn’t matter what you do
All I feel is a disappointment
Please say the words
Please tell me how proud you are of me
I just want to hear it once
I just want to hear you say it
All I want is to feel the love you already have
And not the disappointment
That makes me feel like am not enough

Please say the words
I am proud of you
They will make me feel the love
That you already have
And not the disappointment
That I already feel

About this poem

This poem comes from my soul. This are my feelings written down. I know many people can relate to this pain.

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Written on September 10, 2023

Submitted by on September 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AbAxcdxb bcedFbxxgDx FexgDx
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 693
Words 159
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 8, 11, 6

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  • Jesus3
    I can relate to yourself a lot. I share these same sentiments, but towards my father not my mother though.
    LikeReply6 months ago

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