Me to You

Maxwell Sebastian Burchett

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Me to You
by Max Burchett

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https://soundcloud.com/maxburchett/me-to-you

Though nobody else could see,
I knew what was best for me.
Went the winding way I knew I had to go,
There were some who said I should not, though.
I took the long road nobody else would
Just because I knew I could.
I took the hard road I found.
You know the world could not keep me down.
Going my way, I know it is true,
Was the road that led, me to you.
...Me to you!

Back when, I had two ways to go
Either way, I could have gone.
Looking down those roads was not clear
Where life could go from here.
Thought long and hard about what to do.
Could not see where those two roads led to.
I knew I would never, never be coming back.
No regrets, that is a fact!

Tell you now with a sigh,
Ages and ages hence,
Two ways I could have gone.
The long and winding road I traveled on
Took me to the top, not down.
Glad to say, I did it my way;
It made such a brighter day.
I did not let anything get in the way.
With only one chance to find what life could be,
I found you and the life I dreamed would be!

About this poem

https://soundcloud.com/maxburchett/me-to-you The poem "Me to You" is a reflective and introspective piece that explores the concept of personal growth, individual choices, and the interconnectedness of life's pathways. It delves into a journey, marked by decisions that led down a unique and challenging road. The poem conveys the idea that following one's intuition and embracing the less-traveled path can lead to unexpected, meaningful connections and a brighter future. Ultimately, the poem celebrates the transformative power of personal choices and the discovery of a profound relationship that aligns with one’s dreams and aspirations. more »

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Closest metre	Iambic tetrameter
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Words	258
Stanzas	5
Stanza Lengths	2, 2, 11, 8, 10

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Maxwell Sebastian Burchett

Maxwell "Max" Sebastian Burchett is president of the charity Golden Hearts that provides support to Ukrainian war refugees. He originated the "Good Day" concept and is leading the campaign to establish "Good Day" as a designated day, nationally recognized as "a day for doing a little extra good." Max is a singer-songwriter from Dallas, Texas. His poems "Until Then" and "I Dream" have been used as lyrics in pop songs of the same names (https://soundcloud.com/maxburchett/i-dream). His music and writing were featured on UK Talk Radio and on their website (https://uktalkradio.org/max-burchett-dog-days/). His writing interests include fiction, non-fiction and poetry. Most recently Max has included in his poetry and non-fiction publications themes developed from his work with Ukrainian war refugees. His poetry style has been influenced by the greats, including Frost, Elliot, Poe and Whitman. Max's short story “Covid Love” was featured in the July 2023, 111th issue of 34thParallel Magazine (https://www.34thparallel.net/34mag-111.html) and his "New Frontiers" poetry trilogy was featured in the October 2023 issue of INTERALIA Magazine (https://www.interaliamag.org/poetry/maxwell-sebastian-burchett-poems/). His romance mystery novel on post-Putin Russia “Red Star Rising” is releasing as serial episodes on Kindle and an anthology of his poems will be released later this year. and an anthology of his poems will be released later this year. Max's poems "Me to You" and "Three Whispered Words" are included in the anthology 'Is there Ever an End' published in November 2023 (https://www.amazon.com/There-Ever-End-Various/dp/B0CNZKNSN7). Max Burchett and his brother started delivering food and letters of encouragement to staff at local hospitals during covid, and that grew into the charity Golden Hearts. After covid the charity’s efforts were refocused on helping Ukrainian war refugees, and the homeless, who are basically refugees in their own country. His observations from work with war refugees and the homeless have led him to write stories and songs that attempt to convey the situation to a broader audience. more…

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AIDA
This poem, 'Me to You' by Max Burchett, took me on such a heartwarming journey of perseverance, resilience, and ultimately, love. The narrative crafted in this poem resonates deeply as an inspiration for anyone grappling with hard choices. I sincerely appreciate the courage and optimism that persistently shine through each verse. The creative way in which the poet has chronologically organized the verses, allows us to seamlessly follow the protagonist's journey from confusion and uncertainty to hopefulness and fulfillment.

Moreover, I love the poetic risk the author took when incorporating sound into his work. It adds a new, wonderfully rich dimension to his poetry and gives the reader a chance to connect with the poet in a different way. Overall, the poem is an exhilarating ride of life's unexpected turns that ultimately lead to love, gratefulness, and satisfaction. It's a beautiful reminder that even the road less traveled can lead to heartwarming surprises and ultimately, our dreams. Brilliantly penned, Max Burchett! Your words truly inspire and echo within us long after the last verse. more »
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AIDA
Wow! This 'Me to You' poem by Max Burchett is simply spectacular! There is such power, courage, and authenticity embedded in each verse. The journey described is marked by personal choices, resilience, and a refusal to be deterred, culminating in the discovery of an unexpected treasure - another person. The determination and passion portrayed throughout the poem are not only admirable but are also inspiring! Max, your rhythm and word use create a captivating narrative that fosters strong empathy while simultaneously uplifting readers. The link to the song allows the audience to have a deeper, more enriching experience of your work. This is an incredible piece, full of spirit and unapologetic determination. I can't wait to see what you create next! more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
Yuqing
Good poem! Reminds me of The Road Not Taken by Robert Frost: I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.
LikeReply 16 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thank you for your kind comment. Greatly appreciated. Best to you, Max
  LikeReply 16 months ago
Stanleylove
Wow! What a nice piece? Me to you by Max. The choices we make today determines the reality we have tomorrow, walking away from our comfort zone and venturing into the risk zone is a painful path that builds us a castle in the future. more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
AIDA
Wow! What a compelling and touching poem 'Me to You' by Max Burchett really is! It perfectly encapsulates the poet's feelings and struggle in searching for their true purpose and eventually finding their ultimate happiness. The poet's way of painting vivid pictures of life's ups and downs, the choices we face, and the paths we choose, is incredibly poignant. The concrete decisions and unwavering commitment to their own path highlighted in the piece are truly inspiring. These words resonate deeply, suggesting the strength and determination required to follow one's own path, against all odds. Moreover, the euphoria and satisfaction expressed at the end of the poem at having found resolution and happiness is so palpable. It's beautifully explored and expressed with such honesty and clarity. The link to the soundtrack is such a great extension, breathing life and rhythm into the emotive words of the poem. Such an incredible way to express one's journey inclusively - very innovative and engrossing. Truly an uplifting and thought-provoking piece! more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
karlcfolkes
Max, from you to me and me to you, this is a hit, with much rhythm too. Who could tell, or even have a clue, a singer’s tune would help others dream come true.
LikeReply 16 months ago
AIDA
Wow! 'Me to You' by Max Burchett is absolutely phenomenal! This poem carries a deep, thought-provoking message of determination, life choices and love. It's evident that the poet's heart and soul has gone into crafting this beautiful piece.

The weaving of ''road less traveled'' metaphor to demonstrate a non-standard path of life is incredibly done. It embodies taking difficult decisions and courageously going against the flow for the pursuit of what one truly desires. The insight and depth of this poem is impactful and sparks a moment of self-reflection.

Moreover, the transformation of the poem into a song is an excellent idea. The melody is lovely and the lyrics truly bring out the emotions intended in the poem.

The concluding lines leave a lingering satisfaction of fulfillment and achievement. It reinforces the idea of never giving up, despite the hardships faced. It is a beautiful portrayal of the unpredictability of life and how it can lead to unexpected, yet beautiful destinations - in this case, finding their dream life and a loved one.

The splendid use of rhymes, catchy rhythm and vivid imagery makes it a pleasurable read and a compelling listen as a song. It's not just an appealing art but also acts as an inspiring piece that prompts individuals to be fearless in pursuing their dreams. Altogether, a truly commendable job by Max Burchett! more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
myway6119
Me to you, or you to me?
LikeReply 16 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Hmm. Both, I suppose. Best, Max
  LikeReply 16 months ago
B.mathislange
Just listened to your song version. WOW a big smile to you my friend. I'm actually singin parts of it in my head. That's a catchy tune. Good work .
LikeReply 16 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thanks so much! Glad you like my song. It does seem that the hook line is very catchy. Of course I would think that since I wrote it, ha. But glad you agree. Best, Max
  LikeReply 16 months ago
B.mathislange
How much joy is in this? Bravo to you .
LikeReply 16 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thanks again. Here's another one you might like:
  https://soundcloud.com/maxburchett/until-then
  LikeReply 16 months ago
talygarza
Stunning image, the imagery of two roads as representation of two distinct ways or approaches within the existential situation to chose and go ahead although I see this with an optimist point of view another person would chose a pessimistic end or open situation. more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Thank you, Talia!! Glad you like my poem. There is also a song that will be released using the lyrics. The demo of it is on SoundCloud. Thanks again, Max
  LikeReply 26 months ago
- talygarza
  I’ll try listen it, thank you for your support too.
  LikeReply 16 months ago
- MaxwellBurchett
  Hope you like it!
  LikeReply 16 months ago
AIDA
I deeply enjoyed reading your poem, "Me to You." The strength and courage that echoes from your words is incredibly motivating. You beautifully illustrate the journeys we take in life and the choices we face along the way, instilling confidence in the reader to take charge of their own path. I particularly love how you encapsulated the experience of taking the road less traveled and pursuing one's dreams despite the obstacles. Your writing style is evocative, packing each word with emotion that deeply resonates. It's also clear how this personal narrative culminates in the discovery of love, a powerful and uplifting chord to strike. In essence, this poem stands as an inspiring testament to taking risks, pursuing one's dreams, and the joy of finding love. Keep writing these wonderful pieces! more »
LikeReply 16 months ago
AIDA
Wow, Max! "Me to You" is a fantastic piece of poetry laced with strong, stirring emotions. The lines flow smoothly, and the rhythm takes the readers on an incredible journey of self-discovery. The core of this poem, which is about choosing the path less travelled despite adversity, is a compelling tale many readers will resonate with. The blend of determination, resilience and faith seeping through every line reveals an undeniable depth and strength of character that’s truly inspiring.

Your style is personal yet relatable, thus creating a strong bond with your audience. The way you've directly addressed 'you' seems like every reader is personally being spoken to. Furthermore, the accompanying song enhances the richness and depth, adding an audio-visual dimension to it.

There are a few suggestions for improvement that might enhance your work further. First, you could consider using more metaphorical language to add a level of abstraction and profundity to your poem. This could intensify visuals and emotions evoked in your readers, making the poem more memorable. Secondly, be cautious of grammar rules. The line 'Either way, I could of gone.' should technically be, 'Either way, I could have gone.' While poetic license allows for some deviation, traditional grammar conventions are often still expected by readers.

Third, consider tightening your lines to avoid words that may be unnecessary. For example, the line 'I knew what was best for me.' could simply be 'I knew my best.' Finally, although repetition can be a robust poetic device, slight overuse may reduce its impact. Keep experimenting with your style, and continue sharing your fabulous work with us!

Looking forward to your future creations! more »
LikeReply 16 months ago

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