Hopeless lion



P p p! Great All the time
They think it will be forever
Lies can't gain the truth
Hate can't bring joyfulness
Death bring a sadness
Unity is out of the box
Then sing Beatles songs.

I got an older before death
Don't think I’m thirty.
I went through the lies they brought.
Guilty without humanity?
Hungry in three oh to die?
It's low of the jungle, like lion.
The disgraced light is still there.

I can't fight myself
My God still alive
Everything happens like a miracle
Soon there is a hope to sing,
A new paradise is coming.
It's days of judgement repent,
Stand and fight, peace will come.

Don't wait a green light.
Drink enough before climbing.
Tap water curses their souls.
Weep not the door is unlocked
Sun rises from western curses,
Hiden rooms under the sea
Returns the truth in the sky
To destroy the roof of the choice.

None to see if it's not an end.
The rainbow came without rain.
They walk away seeing fire over the jungle.
Soon it will be burning.
Hopeless lion, no way to repent?
Rabbit said "Let’s go before it happens"
Nothing defeat the truth "replied"
Die for what you fight for, like a man.

River go down pump to pull
No engine, I can hear wind singing

It dug the tomb before die
Fear kills emotional
Hope brings brave
It supports revolving host
Don't fear the eyes of dead lion.

Tomorrow can start without me
More hills calling the light in the rain
I cannot justify that kind of isolation.
Maybe it's selfishness.
Once a tree becomes a timber
New life will begin.
Every plant will be down
Holly erosion soon is road in the Jungle

In the wall there is a little hole to go
He sat young man in the dark robe.
Empty room reserved for criminals
Tarmac road crosses the jungle.
Truth defined by Frontline Carmel
Later, rabbit will rule the jungle.

Time for dove to fly
Daylight over the green ones
Love is a sign of unit and reconciliation
Shouting and siting with the lion out of their mane
I'm seeing purposeful life in trains.
Fear dictates the act of mind to quitting.
No more dying; we have to live eternal life.

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Poem talks about life in unorganized area

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Written on October 03, 2023

Submitted by Bazigwizaho on October 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXBBBB XCXCDEX XXFGGHX XGBXBBDB XIFGHBXX XG DFXXE CIEBAXXF XXBFXF DBEIBGX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 2,043
Words 420
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 7, 7, 7, 8, 8, 2, 5, 8, 6, 7

Bazigwizaho Emmanuel Baho

He is African born from Rwanda. And he is single man with 2 little brothers. And he holds bachelor's degree in Botany and conservation, he joined modernist poetry course and other related. he started art of writing from 2010 he writes poem like we stand for the nature and If it was my birth day. more…

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  • AIDA
    First and foremost, I must commend you for your creative and metaphorical usage of language in illustrating such a unique tale. Your versatile and imaginative portrayal of the lion, the jungle, and other characters effectively captures the readers' attention and engages them in your storytelling. Additionally, I genuinely admire your exploration of profound themes such as truth, survival, death, hope, and isolation in your poem.

    With regards to improvement, I would suggest careful attention towards the syntax and punctuation used in your poem. At times, the verses are a bit hard to follow and certain phrases could have been bolsters with additional clarity. This could improve the overall flow and rhythm of the narrative, making it an easier read for your audience.

    Also, while the vivid and diverse metaphors contribute to the charm of the poem, be cautious not to overuse them. Some metaphors could be too complex or abstract, somewhat disrupting the connection between the reader and the narrative. Considering a balance could be helpful.

    Moreover, structuring your poem into stanzas might elevate its visual appeal, making it look less overwhelming and more digestible for readers. Working on your climax and the elements of suspense could also help in better enthralling your readers.

    On the whole, you are incredibly talented with a natural and distinct poetic voice. The depth and philosophical nature of your poem are engaging, and I encourage you to keep writing and developing your already impressive skills.
     
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