Current Concern



My life seems like a river that
Flows quickly to the south.
I cannot yell for help or chat
Since water fills my mouth.

I sometimes will move "with the flow"
The way most people do,
Yet there are times that I must go
Upstream to see the view.

To fight the current is quite hard
And some will try and fail
But I must try and be on guard
To see what life unveils.                             

About this poem

Going against the flow.

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Written on October 06, 2023

Submitted by stevec.24118 on October 06, 2023

Modified by stevec.24118 on October 06, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAB CDCD EXEX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 391
Words 81
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4

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