Still I fall

Issha S Bose 2009 (Ernakulam)



I saw you,
Saw you again,
And then my eyes
never left you.
I thought of you,
Thought of you again,
And you never ever
Left my mind since.
You are like a disease
That will be the end of me
And I know
That it’s too late,
Like the moment you’ve realized
You’ve swum too far out
In the ocean
Like running over the edge of a knife
To see if it will hurt
But still I fall.
My breath is dwindling,
The last thread from the woof
Of my body
And still I fall.
Because even if you’re what kills me
You are also
What cures me.

About this poem

This poem is a brief description of the way a person falls so hard for someone they know they shouldn't. It describes the angst of forbidden feelings, yet also the gold rush when you look at the person.

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Written on September 23, 2023

Submitted by issha on September 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCAABDEFGHIJKLMNOPQGOGHG
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 538
Words 126
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25

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