When she loves

Richard J Edwards 1960 (Ft Belvoir)



When we hold hands the world gets small and actually stops. Everything no longer matters but her and I together for a lifetime.  Everytime we're apart it seems like I'm just half a person. She brings water to a thirsty man who is me. There is so much going on in her heart and mind and I know that we are not far from her desire. She is beauty inside and out for she is always there for us. When she shows me she loves me that is a feat more valuable than any riches a man could ever have a gleam in his eyes for. A man and woman were meant to be together and to me she has brought to my life with her so many treasures that I'd need a separate lifetime to list. Things in life can be confusing at times and when you sooth yourself with the love of your mate things become less of a burden and you have new focus on things. Dont fill up on other things because you need to leave room for love, wait a minute there is always room for love.
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Written on September 22, 2023

Submitted by rjenavy on September 22, 2023

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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