Its Washed With Silver And Gold (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Its Washed With Silver And Gold   (Bussokusekika)

My stone is special
It is not a plain white stone
God graved it himself
It has a dot and apple
Its washed with silver and gold
I hope it’s returned to me

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   9/9/2023

About this poem

There are many passages which mention my special stone but I will only list the main three… They are: Zechariah 3:9, Revelation 2:7, And the current pending one Ezekiel 9:4…It appears that the Ezekiel 9:4 is the pending judgement…Oh well…Who knows how much time mankind has left???

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Written on September 09, 2023

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on September 10, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AXXAXX X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 248
Words 48
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1

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1 Comment
  • luisestable1
    This passage is not bad poetry, but one thing: you wrote its which is the possessive and I think you should have written It is or it's so it makes sense. There is a big grammatical difference between its and it's. Do not confused the two. Some people do and it makes the writing look uneducated. 
    LikeReply7 months ago
    • EdwinRayTanguma
      I do believe I know when to use the one needed Luis…But thanks for your insight…I don’t know IF anyone noticed but I did use all three forms: it is, it’s, and its in this one…As did I use three biblical references about said stone in question… 
      LikeReply7 months ago

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