Concoction



Muddle your way, my way
Crushed opium poppies
and bitter twisted leaves to make tea for
you and your aching mind,
I wrapped you up in paper, limbs folded and elbows poking,
string tied to keep you in place. Wanting you to never change,
condensation forms on my window,
veiling the room in which you will stay, never moving,
always there.
Moonbeams, gentle light. Eyes closing and breath slowing, you feel the heat.
Fragile wings sprout from your delicate shoulder blades, sharp and all mine.
Float a distance but not too far, don’t disappear but go further
away.

About this poem

This poem is about the fear of losing someone you love, and wanting them to willingly love you back.

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Written on October 07, 2023

Submitted by tildasky1 on August 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABCDEFGEHIJKA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 566
Words 106
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 13

Matilda Skyrme

Psychology student at the University of Sheffield, I love to write poetry on the side of my studies. Im passionate about emoting and feeling deeply, which helps me process the complexities of my journey. more…

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