This poem is about the experience of financial hardship and feeling isolated and alone.The



Oh I'm broke, i'm not dope

It feels like a stroke

This is not a joke

I am always feeling dizzy

I have no time to be busy

There's no one to choose me

They're not scared to lose me

I don't know why this is happening to me

They think I'm stingy

Being broke is not funny

Everyone needs money

I'm not in a good condition

I have no connection

It feels like a destruction

I need a solution

I need to overcome this situation

I'm not heartless, yes it's not right

I'm in darkness, yes i need light

This is getting worse, since Twenty-Twenty

My pockets are always empty

I'm different from many

God, help me through this journey

Oh I'm carrying a heavy load

I'm always feeling cold

I don't even have the money to pay rent

I'm just living without a cent

I know this is so strange

I just found myself on this land

It's not my fault that things are starting to bend

I wish one day things can change

Oh lord, check my banks

Later on, I'll say thanks

About this poem

This poem is about the experience of financial hardship and feeling isolated and alone.The last few lines where i ask god for help and express hope that things will Change, suggest that I'm still holding on to to some optimism and faith.

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Written on June 22, 2023

Submitted by Jerome_Tshegofatso on July 28, 2023

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Scheme X A A B B B B B B B B C C C C C D D B B B B X X E E F X X F G G
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 965
Words 217
Stanzas 32
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1

Jerome Tshegofatso Maakamela

My name is Jerome Tshegofatso Maakamela. A 21 year old poet from Phalaborwa Namakgale in Limpopo who studied history.My first poems was published at fundza literacy trust and i love to write about what we're experiencing in life and touch people's feelings. more…

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