No Longer Beats



I can not breath, I can not walk, how can I talk,
when my heart no longer beats?
I've been torn apart so many times, how can I feel, when my heat no longer beats?
You've brought me down to my knees,
I can not stand I'm just to weak,
Why cant you see what you've done to me,
Why cant see my heart no longer beats?
I'm dead inside and you've no REMORSE,
you think everything's alright,
but my heart no longer beats...
I've become a clown whose frown is worn upside down, how can you not see what you've done to me? Just like a clown I put on a show,
even though, an empty shell is what you've left behind,
no one see's, no one care's,
I've become a pro and no one see's what's truly become of me....  

About this poem

I wrote this poem because everyone else, at some point we become someone else who we don't recognize in order to hide the truth of the negative parts of our lives, become its become the norm to be someone with out big problem in front those closest to you in order not not be viewed as weak.

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Written on July 17, 2023

Submitted by luckyaquarius85 on July 17, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABBCDEBFGBHIJE
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 704
Words 155
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 14

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