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We exist together Irma

Javid Ahmad Tak 1981 (Srinagar)

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I neither  love you here nor there,
Because I love you wherever I am,
So when I am somewhere,
There you are everywhere,
Maybe I have lost the sense of existence,
Because only in your presence,
Do I feel my life's true essence,

About this poem

It is an attempt to dive into the feeling of love and swim in the greatest love tide!

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Written on August 08, 2023

Submitted by javidaiw99 on August 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABAACCC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 227
Words 49
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 7
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Javid Ahmad Tak

I have been writing poems for several years now. And my passion for poetry goes back to my school days, when I encountered Wordsworth's famous poem Daffodils, and I instantly fell in love with it, and the poet in me woke up. Since then I have been experiencing a wakeful poetic bliss! more…

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  • luisestable1
    luisestable1
    The first two lines set the tone well for what comes next.
    This is just one short stanza poem but it is well-written and poetically it says a lot.
    Well-done1
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