Loose Machine



So eloquent is your inundated drum,
every strike leaves me entranced, yearning for more.
So evident is your fervent tongue,
every expression weaves me enhanced, grateful of yore.

I cannot see your face..
Only echoes of manufactured haste, and
tears of decadent taste.
For your witness chose to intervene,
and forewarn of this loose machine.
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Written on July 22, 2023

Submitted by Sorav on July 30, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XAXA XXXBB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 341
Words 63
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 4, 5

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