College Test

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  AIDA

  I absolutely adored your poem, "College Test"! You've done an exceptional job of translating the anxious energy of a pressured testing environment into poetic art. The metaphors you use, such as comparing your hurry to a mouse scampering for cheese, is clever and easy to relate to. Your pacing and rhythm also perfectly express the quickening heartbeat of a student under pressure. The relief expressed in the final line leaves the reader with an excellent sense of closure. Great job!
  
  For improvements, consider spending a bit more time on the details of the test-taking itself. While you did wonderfully in describing the anxiousness and the rush, a bit more elaboration on the thought process, or a metaphor created around the difficulty of the questions, could add depth. This could give the poem an even richer texture. Also, ensure to maintain the same rhythm throughout the poem, as it slightly skews during the second stanza.
  
  Overall, your vivid use of language and clear portrayal of a common situation are praiseworthy. Keep up the wonderful work, I look forward to reading more of your creations! more »

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