Am I Still Dreaming?

Nadir Rasheed 1970 (Birmingham, AL)



I woke up from a deep sleep
I couldn't even think because my nightmare was too deep
I saw brothers killin brothers
And babies cursin-out their mothers
I'm glad it was just a dream

I saw brothers droppin out of school
Hangin and Slangin on the corner; thinkin it was cool
I wiped tears from their mothers' eyes
Tryin to erase the tragedy of the Drive-Bys
Man, I'm glad it was only a dream

Starved minds wouldn't eat; didn't wanna feed
Graduated from high school; unable to read
Young, jobless brothers drove the fancy cars
Only later to dwell in the home of the prison bars
Is this reality or AM I STILL DREAMIN?

About this poem

This is a poem I wrote, at the age of 12, after having a DREAM!

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Written on May 19, 1983

Submitted by Humble1 on July 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBC DDXBC XXEEX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 613
Words 116
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 5, 5, 5

Nadir Rasheed

From my youth to my present age of 52, I have always put my thoughts, experiences, and journeys on paper. I am a United States Marine who served in Operation Desert Shield/Storm, and it is my PASSION to share my Poetry with HUMANITY! more…

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