What went wrong



What Went Wrong

Sometimes things fall apart,
And we can't quite put them back together.
Sometimes our love just fades away,
Like a forgotten letter.

We try to hold on tight,
But the winds of change blow strong.
We search for answers in the darkness,
But it seems like everything's gone wrong.

We wonder where our love has gone,
And we try to make it right.
We search for ways to fix the pain,
And find the strength to fight.

But sometimes it's just too much,
And we can't hold on for long.
We learn to let our love go,
And we find the courage to move on.

So when things fall apart,
And the world seems dark and strange,
We'll remember that life goes on,
And there's always a chance for change.

About this poem

People happen to go through a lot, young and old mostly in love life. Unfortunately something are out of our control the only thing we can do is to move on focus on the positive side and accept the change in your life to another level

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Written on June 14, 2023

Submitted by skhosanathulani8 on June 14, 2023

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Scheme A BCXC DAXA XDXD XAXE BFEF
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 698
Words 157
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

Thulani Skhosana

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