Old days were the best days

Shreya Pathak 2007 (Mandi govindgarh)



Lost in time,
weaved with memories,
It was but an old house
and you were mine,
I miss those days
and want to see your face,
Wish for having good strength
so that I would be able to make you my friend,
I never had so much power
but always wanted to love shower,
No need to show you my love
its all about the attention I have given to you,
Really miss those days
when I used to look at your face,
Now I am far from you
don't have any way,
That time was better
atleast I was able to see your face,
Wish for those days to come back
I want to make you my friend.....

Shreya Pathak

About this poem

This is a poem written about old days and what we used to feel at that time.

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Written on June 24, 2023

Submitted by Shreyapathakkhushi on June 24, 2023

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Scheme ABCDEFGHIIJKEFKLIFMH
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 576
Words 133
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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