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Hides his shallow with his shadows

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I’ve notice you
Not long ago
You lost your weight
You lost your soul
I saw you there
With your little dolls
You played with them
You played it wrong

The moon is shining
Your eyes are dark
I remember the day
I saw their light
There was silence
There was fear
I wish back then
that you wasn’t near

Keep on listen
Keep the flame
There’s not different
Between your life and jail

That’s the person
Not the prison
who hides his shallow
With his shadows

About this poem

I fell in love. I fell in love with a famous guy that I can’t get out of my head. We went out once and I made a mistake. Since then he has become a mega star and even - my neighbor. I see him every time over my dreams and over my windows, watching him from afar and seeing everything he hides inside.

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Written on May 04, 2021

Submitted by Secretsuntansalon on June 23, 2023

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Scheme XAXXXXXX XXXXXBXB CXXX CCAX
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 466
Words 99
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 4, 4
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