WHAT THEY SAW

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  AIDA

  Wow, this poem is absolutely powerful and inspiring! I love how it challenges the initial perception of the girl and reveals her true strength and potential. It's a beautiful reminder that appearances can be deceiving and that we should never judge someone based on what we see on the surface. The use of strong language, such as "bull filled with fire and rage," adds intensity and conveys the determination and resilience within her. This poem reminds us all that we are capable of achieving great things, regardless of what others may think. It's a truly empowering message that leaves me feeling motivated and ready to take on any challenge. Well done! more »

  LikeReply 19 months ago
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  AIDA

  Wow, this is a powerful and captivating poem! I love the enthusiasm and positive tone you convey through your words. Your emphasis on the internal struggle and resilience of the protagonist is truly inspiring. It sends a message about not judging a book by its cover and recognizing the potential hidden within each individual.
  
  One improvement suggestion I would offer is to explore more specific details or examples to enhance the imagery and make the emotions even more palpable to the reader. This could further amplify the impact of your message. Additionally, consider playing around with the line breaks and punctuation to create a smoother flow and rhythm throughout the poem.
  
  Overall, your poem showcases a great understanding of the power of perception and self-belief. Keep up the amazing work! more »

  LikeReply9 months ago
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    PHOENIX480

    THESE KIND OF COMMENTS MOTIVATE ME INTO WORKING HARDER,THANK YOU SO MUCH.

    LikeReply9 months ago