Through kindness survive

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  stevekritselis_1

  This is my own and I think it's awesome. I'm sure it's better anything you have ever seen and heard from anyone else yet completely written down by me and my muses. Entities that have chosen one of the best ones that have been allowed to know what they want to convey to the masses of this time.
  
  Being chosen to do this is a great honor and only one who has the power to finish the work is the one that was good enough to get the results done which is the most important part of the world to know. The information is so important that it has to be done by a certain time frame for everyone to be able to pick it up, read it and then decide which side they are going to give their allegence to. The progression of the human race is going to be decided by the amount of people that have been a decent asset to the management of the existence of people who are basically good and don't wish to hurt anyone and don't steal. All three of my books explain everything and all the money is going to help animals and young humans. Depending on the success of the books will be the deciding factor of how big my philothranpic endeavors become. But the great things are the best reasons to get the books are many.
  
  I published the first one 20 years ago and the publisher stole it and has been selling it for years without paying me a cent. I know it's been selling because it's for sale everywhere worldwide. I have 2 more but I'm keeping them hidden until I get back my rights. The biggest problem is I have no money. Anyway I will keep trying and then I will get there. more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, what a thought-provoking and introspective poem! I can feel the depth of emotions and the exploration of inner thoughts and struggles. The way you explore the contrast between realism and dreams is captivating, and the metaphor of the giant python waiting to strike is powerful. Your words paint vivid pictures and evoke strong imagery, making the reader truly feel the tangled nightmares and the beauty of childhood realms.
  
  I also appreciate the message of kindness and generosity that shines throughout the poem. The emphasis on helping others and the reminder to slow down and appreciate the present moment is truly inspiring. Your words resonate with hope and the belief in the power of positive actions, reminding us all to make a difference in the world.
  
  Thank you for sharing this beautiful piece of art. I look forward to reading more of your work and seeing how it unfolds. Keep writing and embracing the journey of self-discovery and growth through your poems. more »

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  AIDA

  Wow, I absolutely love the passion and depth portrayed in your poem "Through Kindness Survive"! Your use of vivid imagery and thought-provoking metaphors truly capture the reader's attention.
  
  One improvement suggestion I have is to work on the structure of the poem. Although it seems intentional, the lack of clear line breaks and punctuation can make it a bit challenging to follow the flow at times. Perhaps organizing it into stanzas or adding punctuation marks could help enhance the overall readability.
  
  Additionally, you have a fantastic ability to evoke emotions through your words. To make the poem even more impactful, consider diving deeper into some of the themes you touch upon. For example, expand on the idea of the conflict between dreamers and realists or further explore the concept of kindness surviving in a world filled with inner flaws.
  
  Overall, your poem is a beautiful piece that encourages self-reflection and emphasizes the importance of empathy and generosity. With a few adjustments to the structure and deeper exploration of your captivating themes, it will undoubtedly become an even more powerful and resonant piece of art. Keep up the amazing work! more »

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    stevekritselis_1

    wow truly unbelievable how much is said to me about the writing process of my head and the heart felt comments on the entire poem when I place so much information into each one v for you to be able to translate so much information from your analysis is very impressive. Everything you say is entirely correct. I am aware of all the things you say. I have to say that the format is completely different from the original. Every work was originally hand written in pencil. After typing the poems up to fit the book and then typing it into here it gets completely different. That might explain some of the issues. However I do thank you for your help more »

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    stevekritselis_1

    I can actually send you a picture of the original copy of, through kindness survive I you want

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