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Achievement

Valiantstar 1961 (Sydney)

If I don't try to achieve achievement comes to me.
When I seek achievement nothing can I  see.

Only conclusion
What will be will be.

No use striving wasting time, time's a theif.
  
Sitting on my behind will not give me meat.

Life is calling us, freely we receive,

Come: Give your life to me; I'll show you glory,

How to be free
Without fear
I am
Here.
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Written on June 28, 2023

Submitted by myway6119 on June 28, 2023

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Scheme AA XA B X B A AXXX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 363
Words 83
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 4
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