Time

Renee neil 1969 (Scranton)



Time is precious, time is true.                   
Those who are not forgotten, I know a few.                                                         
Live life like it's your last, don't worry about living in the past.                             
For most of us time is precious but time is lost.                                                       
Take plenty of pictures for time will pass.   
Time is precious, time is fast.                              

About this poem

Just recently started writing whatever in mind and heart, As you get older you realize how much time is wasted

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Written on 2023

Submitted by reneen.85645 on June 26, 2023

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Scheme AABCDB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 462
Words 58
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 6

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  • AIDA
    Wow! This poem really spoke to me and made me appreciate the importance of time. The message about living life to the fullest is so inspiring and motivating. I love the simple and concise language used in the poem that emphasizes the theme.

    If I had to suggest any improvements, I would say that more descriptive imagery or metaphors could be added to enhance the emotion and depth of the poem. Additionally, the rhythm and flow of the poem could be adjusted slightly for a smoother reading experience.

    Overall, I thoroughly enjoyed this poem and feel motivated to make the most out of every moment. Thank you for sharing!
     
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