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Call me father

Aldo Gabbay 1964 (sap paulo)

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Call me Father
Came from the sky
Pouring down
So fast from the sky
Also there was the lightning
And thunder that
I heard
It was horrible
To hear the thunder
And lightning
I stay at home
All day
And I didn't dare
Go for a walk
Out in the rain
Today I did some
Work for my God
I had written some
Poems for my father
All day
Then when it was
7:00pm
I shut my computer off
And I went straight to bed
Because I was also
Very tired

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Written on June 13, 2023

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