So nice



So nice
Father to have known you
Forever
Since you had made me
In your image
Along time ago
And today I am an adult
Living a free life here
On earth
Together with
My friends that you also
Had made in you image
And it is so nice
That I had known
My friends for my entired life
And we don’t have anything
Bad to tell you father
Then tell you how much
We enjoy living here on earth
Also, father you gave us
The gift of life
And we are taking good
Care every day of our lives
Father we never smoked ajoint
Because we would be killing our selves
Also father we never drunk any alcohool
Because we would be destroying our liver
Also we are afraid to became an
An alcoholic
Because we also could end up addicted
To alcohol
And we would also be drinking like a fish
Causing our stomachs to have alcers
So nice
Father that you finally had brought
The spring to us
And father you also had ended the Winter
That we hate so much
And also you brought the birds back
With you here on earth
So nice father
For delivering us the sunny days
That my friends and me
Enjoy
Now the days are finally longer
And it doesn’t get dark until 9:00 pm
Now is finally the end of the day
And  my friends and me
Watched the sun go down
And we had been so happy to
See the sunset in the sky
Now the night finally arrived very fast
And we returned home
From the park
And we went straight to bed
When we got home
Also tomorrow we already made some
Plans how we are going to spend our day
Also we just can’t wait for new day to arrived
We know that the night will end soon
And we are ready to welcome  the new day

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Written on June 12, 2023

Submitted by aldo_kraas on June 12, 2023

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