Unseen Desires



She fell first, but he didn't care,
Her love shown, he chose to be unaware.
Seeking friendship, she approached with care,
Yet he kept her distant, unaware.

Her heart stumbled, his indifference stark,
Love's language, lost in the dark.
Yearning for kinship, she hoped in vain,
He barred her path, causing her pain.

With longing, she wished for bonds to grow,
But he rejected, keeping her in tow.
Her steps drew near, his resistance strong,
A chasm between them, lasting long.

Yet, within this tale of unrequited plight,
Hope's flame flickers, a guiding light.
For love's tenacity knows no bounds,
To awaken hearts, where silence resounds.

In patience, they find destiny's decree,
In this narrative of hearts set free.
Though she fell unnoticed, her spirit soars,
Love's tale in Indian English, it roars.

About this poem

The poem tells the story of a woman who falls in love with a man who remains indifferent and unaware of her affection. Despite her attempts to establish a friendship and bridge the gap between them, he keeps her at a distance, causing her pain and heartache. The poem portrays the woman's yearning for their relationship to deepen and for her love to be reciprocated. She hopes in vain for their bond to grow, but the man rejects her advances, creating a significant divide between them. The emotional distance is vividly depicted as a "chasm" that lasts for a long time. However, amidst the tale of unrequited love, there is a glimmer of hope. The poem suggests that love's tenacity knows no limits and can overcome even the most resistant hearts. It highlights the power of patience and the potential for destiny to intervene, leading to a resolution where hearts can be set free. The closing lines are particularly striking, emphasizing the resilience and soaring spirit of  

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Written on May 26, 2023

Submitted by nipunhpunj0 on May 26, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AAAA BBCC DDEE FFGG HHII
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 806
Words 156
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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