Once

Alan Scott 1953 (Southampton)

May 23 



I
Once, I knew a soul                                                                                                             
clothed with the body of a woman,                                     
infinite in moods as the sea.
                                                                                         
It was the spirit in that soul,
arranging itself like cold
Atlantic mist

from colliding atmospheres and moving
with ethereal sadness,
that finally depicted me.

II
Once, I felt: such intimacy
exposed the seething
addiction to being               

that once disturbed
by its own willingness,
flexed briefly,

like a pool-reflected image
that’s just been
stepped into.                          

About this poem

Written several lifetimes ago when I was a teenager. I think it was after a failed relationship but that's being speculative. I can however confidently say - it was at a time when both adolescent hormones and emotions were coursing unchecked through a pre-adult body and mind which is surprising given the calm and even tenor of the voice.

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Submitted by scott.alan116 on May 12, 2023

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Scheme ABXC BXX DEC ACDD XEC XXX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 762
Words 93
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 3, 3, 4, 3, 3

Alan Scott

Raised in a number of parts of the world - Trinidad (West Indies) Lake District in England and finally South Africa. Writing has always been a passion - English was one of my majors at university and was designed for a career in journalism and novel writing before life got in the way. I ended up as a corporate executive in the manufacturing industry. I stopped writing poems about 20-25 years ago and now devote my spare time to writing screenplays - but the poetry in me still infuses my prose unabated. more…

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