Dad



Headed to the ICU, don't know what to expect.
The doctor says you won't pull through, your mind can't recollect.
 
I'm gripping your hand tightly, crying tears I can't retain, cause' this time those prescription pills took more than just your pain.

You lay there unresponsive, I just want to hear your voice. They're taking you off life support, we're left without a choice.

Our family's here to comfort you, this room is filled with sorrow. We know this day will be your last, you won't be here tomorrow.

You're clinging on with all your strength, my heart is sorely aching. It hurts to watch you struggle now, with every breath you're taking.

I said my last goodbyes, but nearly choked on every word. And now, here ten years later, I still wonder if you heard.

Though I'm trapped in desolation living life without your presence, you'll always be here in my heart, averting evanescence.

I'll cherish every memory from the moments that we shared. And though your death was unexpected, I never would have been prepared.

I'm accepting this reality, my pain can find release. But you'll always be remembered, Dad.
I love you.
Rest in peace.
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Written on May 30, 2023

Submitted by Butterfly1717 on May 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA X X X X X X X XXX
Characters 1,147
Words 217
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 3

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