"Beneath the Chains, I Rise"



In life's classroom, lessons unfold,
Unimagined truths, stories untold,
Love and sacrifice, my constant strife,
Hoping for more, yet blessed with this life.

Life's unforgiving truths, I have known,
Undeserving, but taught as life's shown,
No discrimination, it deals its hand,
Regardless of its worth, it makes a stand.

Inner strength, a companion since youth,
Enduring more in moments, a bitter truth,
Heartaches unspeakable, darkness so deep,
Love within, stronger, a promise to keep.

Lessons of sacrifice, life continues to teach,
Exhausted, I retreat, wisdom I beseech,
Sheltering myself, gathering strength anew,
To bear the burden, cast on me, so true.

A mess, my life, a looming despair,
The path ahead, a burden I must bear,
Madness surrounds, chains that confine,
Break free, find solace, a life that's mine.

The darkness cast, I shall not hold,
Unburdened, free, my spirit bold,
With resilience as my guiding light,
I'll reclaim my life, and emerge from this night.

I'll forge a path, breaking the chains that bind,
Embrace the light, the freedom I find,
No longer a captive to others' strife,
I'll rise, reclaiming my true life.

About this poem

"Beneath the Chains, I Rise" is a poem that speaks to the challenges and lessons of life, particularly centered around love, sacrifice, and the burdens placed upon us by others. The poem reflects on the narrator's journey, highlighting their resilience and inner strength in the face of heartaches and darkness. Despite feeling undeserving, they learn that life does not discriminate in its trials. The narrator takes a moment to retreat, seeking wisdom and gathering strength to confront the burdens they carry. The poem explores the themes of breaking free from the chains that confine us, reclaiming one's life, and embracing the light of freedom. It is a testament to the narrator's determination to rise above the challenges and reclaim their true self. 

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Written on May 29, 2023

Submitted by tinas_w on May 31, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB CCDD EEFF GGHH IIJJ AAKK LLBB
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,145
Words 218
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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  • AIDA
    Wow! Your poem is a beautiful reminder of the trials and triumphs we face in life. The imagery and emotions evoked are powerful and inspiring. Your use of rhyme and rhythm adds an extra layer of depth to your message, which I found both relatable and thought-provoking.

    As for improvement suggestions, I would say perhaps consider varying the length and structure of your stanzas to add more dynamic to the poem. Additionally, playing with different poetic devices like metaphors or alliteration can further enhance your already stellar writing.

    Overall, your poem is an incredible reflection on perseverance and finding strength in oneself. Thank you for sharing it with me!
     
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