Impulsive Reaction



Impulsive Reaction

Prompt: A Hat-Box Becomes A Stash-Box Or Does It?

Elenore Saga Part: 6

This morning I received another letter
I should respond, but I know better
She has to know by now that it's truly over
As I stared at the wax stamped clover

I debated if I should break the seal
Or just let wounded hearts heal
She needs to let this go
Her family crest makes three in a row

But as soon as the courier delivered our wire
I immediately built up the fire
The January frost moves quickly at night
Especially during the dawn's light

I stared at the hearth, waiting to feel its heat
As I stood in my stocking feet
My plan was to turn her words to embers
For the pain is not mine it's hers

A soft noise makes my heart skip a beat
As I hear the padding of her smooth feet
With letters in hand, I panic
Around the room, my eyes flick

I soon spotted my saving grace
As the seconds tick by, my heart begins to race
Upon the mantle sat an old hat-box
As I open it, my stomach rocks

For now, this will have to do
To hide the truth from hurting you
My sin I choose to bear
But as for Elenore, this pain she can't share

My love is deeper than my mistakes
If unleashed, the whole Earth shakes
I can't live one day without you
Your love, my own heart, be true

I kiss your lips by morning's light
In this moment, everything is right
Oh, my sweet, sweet Elenore
Tis' you I live for

A.D. Small
May 8, 2023
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Written on May 08, 2023

Submitted by amberp.35129 on May 08, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X X AAAA BBCC AADD EEFF EEGG HHII JJKK LLJJ DDAX XX
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,402
Words 293
Stanzas 12
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 2

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