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One more life

Kaynat zahid 2002 (Lahore)

When I was sitting all alone
Drained in memories full of stones
Dejected being, badly thrown
Desiring just once to be flown
Living life as someone's loan
Existence in this deadly zone
This is how i was grown

Now you are here to make me own
Consoling as nothing was gone
Comforting with your melodic tone
No flaws, defects to be shown
Accepting me from skin to bone
Giving an identity as a keystone
This is how i was known

About this poem

God has always made a healer for you when you are at the edge of being lost. There is always a door open when all are closed

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Written on May 07, 2023

Submitted by kaynat_z on May 07, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AXAAAAA AXAAAAA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 422
Words 81
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 7, 7
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