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comfort zone

r. m. s.

Haiku
Sunlight burns my eyes
so I shut the window blinds,
I go back to sleep.

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let me go to sleep!

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Written on March 28, 2022

Submitted by r.m.s. on May 05, 2023

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Scheme ABC
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 71
Words 16
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 3
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  • luisestable1
    luisestable1
    These three lines have much to say. The bed is preferable here. But what kind of life is that of this person who finds comfort being in bed? What is he or she trying to avoid or avoiding? It is time to get up. It seem that he or she has been in bed long time, but he or she goes back to it. One could say more about this poem. It is a good one for what is there that the poem does not explicitly says. 
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