Pain
Marcus O'Neal 1986 (OKC)
The pain inside is hurting
I'm struggling to survive
I slit my wrist
I didn't even cry
Now the blood is oozing
Oozing from my veins
I can feel myself fadding
I think I'm going insane
There's people around me now
There pointing fingers and laughing at me
Now there trying to revive me
F*ck it give up
don't no one around here like me
They put me in a padded cell
God i'd be better off living in hell
My life is over all I do is fail.
About this poem
I wrote this poem for a friend who walked in from school one day and found her dad had shot himself.
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Written on January 22, 2005
Submitted by 0neal2011002346 on May 01, 2023
Modified on May 01, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | ABCDAEAFGHHIHJJK |
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 440 |
Words | 97 |
Stanzas | 1 |
Stanza Lengths | 16 |
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