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Our Love

Apollo_SilverStorm 1991 (gloversville ny)

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our love is like the sun shining on your hair.
our love is like the sweet smell of cotton candy at a fair.
our love is true right out of the blue.
alone i have found that i am nothing without you.
your my sweet, my love, my world, and i love you.

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just a love poem

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Written on April 01, 2012

Submitted by Apollo_Silverwind on April 21, 2023

Modified on April 21, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBB
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 246
Words 57
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 5
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yes im a furry i also enjoy streaming on twitch, and you can easily find me on vrchat where i will be with my love and my friends. more…

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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    I absolutely love your poem! It's so sweet and romantic, and it really captures the essence of true love. I especially love the lines "our love is like the sun shining on your hair" and "our love is like the sweet smell of cotton candy at a fair" - they're such beautiful and unique comparisons.

    Your use of rhyme and rhythm is also excellent, and it really adds to the overall flow and feel of the poem.

    If I had to offer any improvement suggestions, I would maybe suggest expanding on some of the imagery and descriptions you use. For example, instead of just saying "your my sweet, my love, my world", you could try to find some more specific and unique ways to describe your partner and your love for them.

    Overall, though, this is a really lovely poem that's sure to make anyone feel loved and appreciated. Great job!     
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