A Treasure Beyond Boasting: The Depths of Her Soul and Enchanted Gaze



Her adoration is what he craves the most,
A hunger deep within, a thirst profound,
A flame that burns with fervor unrestrained,
A yearning that consumes his very soul.
He longs to bask in the warmth of her gaze,
Her love, a treasure he cherishes dear.

Yet, like a riddle, she remains unclear,
Her feelings hidden, mysteries to boast,
Her eyes a puzzle, a penetrating gaze,
Her words a dance, a puzzle to confound,
Her heart a fortress, guarding her soul,
Her love a prize he's desperate to attain.

He tries to win her heart, but all in vain,
For she eludes him, distant and severe,
Her walls erected high to guard her soul,
Her affections veiled, a prize to boast,
Her presence taunting, teasing, to confound,
Her charm a spell, captivating gaze.

He's captivated by her beguiling gaze,
Enchanted by her beauty, he's entranced,
Her allure irresistible, hard to confound,
Her every move a mystery to boast,
Her grace and poise a shield for her soul,
Her love a treasure he yearns to obtain.

He'll do whatever it takes to obtain
Her love, to capture her elusive gaze,
He'll scale the walls that guard her precious soul,
He'll navigate the maze, relentless, entranced,
Determined to unravel her hidden boast,
To solve the puzzle that seems to confound.

But as he delves deeper, he is confound,
For what he finds is not what he'd obtain,
Her heart, a labyrinth he can't boast,
Her love, a challenge, slipping from his gaze,
Her walls, a fortress, leaving him entranced,
Her secrets buried deep within her soul.

He realizes it's not just her outer soul,
But the innermost chambers that confound,
Her complexity, a mystery that entranced,
Her love, a prize he can't simply obtain,
Her essence more than meets the eye, her gaze
A window to a world she dares not boast.

He learns that love is not a thing to boast,
It's not a treasure to be won or soul
Obtained, but rather, it's a meeting gaze,
A connection that transcends what can confound,
A bond that's formed beyond what we obtain,
A union of hearts, a love that's truly entranced.

So he lets go of the need to obtain,
To boast, to confound, and with a soul entranced,
He simply loves her, cherishes her gaze.

He loves her for who she is, and not just what she could give,
He admires her for her strength, her wit, her will to live,
He values her for her heart, her kindness, and her grace,
Her adoration is what he craves, but her love is a sacred space.

He accepts her flaws, her insecurities, and her fears,
He embraces her scars, her vulnerabilities, and her tears,
He listens to her stories, her hopes, and her dreams,
Her love, a symphony of emotions, he hears it in her silent screams.

He understands that love is not just a feeling or an emotion,
It's a commitment to each other, a lifelong devotion,
It's a journey that requires patience, trust, and respect,
It's a bond that withstands trials, storms, and every aspect.

He learns that her adoration is not just for him to take,
It's a two-way street, a balance that both of them must make,
It's a mutual admiration, a partnership, a bond,
A love that grows with time, and never gets old or fond.

He realizes that her adoration is not just a mere desire,
It's a need to feel loved, accepted, and to aspire,
To be with someone who sees her for who she is,
And not just as an object of affection or a mere bliss.

So he loves her, not just for what she could offer him,
But for who she is, and what she could become,
He loves her with all her complexities, her contradictions,
Her adoration is what he craves, but her love is beyond description.




















The poem is part of a full version found in the book "Homo Sapiens" Part XVII, written by Mawphniang Napoleon. This book is part of the popular "Homo Sapiens" book series, which can be purchased online at various online bookstores, such as Amazon. The book is available for purchase for those who are interested in reading the complete version of the poem. Remember to get all the books from the "Homo Sapiens" series, as well as other books by the same author.

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Khublei Shihajar Nguh,
Dhanewad
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About this poem

The poem portrays a deep longing for someone's adoration, but also highlights the complexity and mystery of the person being admired. The speaker realizes that love is not about possessing or obtaining the other person, but rather about accepting and cherishing them for who they truly are. It emphasizes the importance of mutual respect, understanding, and commitment in a loving relationship, and how true love goes beyond superficial desires and embraces the entirety of a person's being. The poem beautifully captures the depth and intricacy of human emotions and the multifaceted nature of love. 

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Written on December 23, 2018

Submitted by Mawphniang.Napoleon on April 18, 2023

Modified on April 19, 2023

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Scheme ABXCDE EADBCF FECABD DGBACF FDCGAB BFADGC CBGFDA ACDBFG FGD XXHH XXII JJKK LLMM NXXX XXXJ N X LAX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 4,172
Words 862
Stanzas 18
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 6, 3, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 1, 1, 3

Mawphniang Napoleon

Mawphniang is a person who is always striving to live life to the fullest. He is someone who is always open to new ideas and ways of living and is unafraid to take risks in order to explore the unknown. He is passionate about life and is always looking for ways to make use of his time and energy. He has an inquisitive nature, and is always looking for answers to life's mysteries and questions. Though Mawphniang does not pretend to have all the answers, he is determined to taste life and live a simple life, without overcomplicating things. He's a person who appreciates the small moments and cherishes the little things in life. He enjoys spending time in nature, exploring the world, and connecting with people. He is a person who is always up for a new adventure and never stops learning. He is on a daily journey of self-discovery, trying to make sense of the world and his place in it. more…

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